FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Psychic Predictions]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
It serves the purpose that it is supposed to. I mean if you want to believe this kind of thing, then that's great.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't do too much of the graphics on your own. You just took a picture of a psychic and then some nice looking text. It would have been a lot better if you had maybe drawn your own art and spent some more time on the graphical aspect of this.

[JigglyDeath]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Musical changes were good and relevant.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game was pretty lame. It's no different than any other Pokemon killing games. It was very simplistic and very short with very limited graphics. Extremely boring and not fun to play at all. Needs More challenge to it.

[the mens room]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Graphically the game was pretty pleasing. You have a good idea how to make things look nice, and the flashy correct message was pretty neat. An interesting idea from a game, though not that hard.

^^Needs Improving^^
Was the fifth question a trick one or something? I guess you aren't allowed to take a piss in that case.

[Guitar King]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
It was presented pretty well. After reviewing most of your stuff in the past, this is definitely one of your better works, graphically speaking.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game was just really awkward to me. Having the guitar vertically and the keys horizontally really made it hard to get a hang of. I think the guitar should have been upright and the strings should have matched up with the keys.

wolfinator-x responds:

I used up alot of text filters so I got an "aluring" interface.

Also, I created the game to be "awkward" with the guitar neck different than the keys. I intend to do a Wii version, so it won't be as tough.

[Die Hampsters Die]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well, it's more interesting than most of these crappy random violence games. It at least wasn't point and click, which is getting really annoying.

^^Needs Improving^^
You make a game against a website that you voluntarily visit, which doesn't make much sense to me, but whatever. The only thing I don't really like is the fact that you can just hold down the Z button and get a constant laser and hit everything.

[Zombie Wars]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
You had different levels, which is always good I suppose.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game was pretty boring. You should have added some sort of short movie to this to give it a storyline or something. However, before you do this, you really need to make the game better. First off, there is no incentive to shoot any zombies without guns, as they just run across the screen, not attacking, and you don't get points for them. Detection is terrible, and you have to shoot in a very small area of the body for it to count.

[w.w.t.b.a.m. v2.0by joshR]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Yikes. It was pretty bad :[

^^Needs Improving^^
This one was even worse than the first. The questions didn't even make sense half of the time. They were simply your opinion on various things, which makes them really hard to answer correctly. Annoying sound effects as well.

[Africa Wars-Ethiopia]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Seemed like it would at least be a unique storyline. Not many games take place in Ethiopia. I liked how parts of the environment were interactive.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main problem is in your scripting. It seems to freeze my computer up, as well as everyone else's, which causes you to "lose" the game. Besides that, the game was decent. However, it didn't seem like you could kill the mercenaries. I shot one like 10 times and it still didn't die.

[w.w.t.b.a.m. josh version]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I guess if you are into random trivia this isn't a bad quiz.

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing I don't like is how you had a lot of current events questions, so obviously this doesn't really stand the test of time. Also, some of the questions were just silly and didn't make any sense. Could have used some sound effects from the show or something.

[Sea Battle Simulator 2000]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics and sound effects weren't too bad. I liked the little guys flying out of the boat.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really needs something more to it. The other ship doesn't retaliate, which doesn't make it much of a battle. It only takes five hits, which is extremely easy to do. Really just needs a bit more to make it more interactive.