FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mouse Maze Tut]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, it explains what to do to make a maze game. It's really quite simple how to make one, but you gave the scripts which is nice. It was cool how you gave examples of your instructions and also some playable demos.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, compress your music. You didn't really go into detail on what to do either, which I found pretty lame. You gave very broad instructions and I'm not sure if someone who didn't already know how to make a maze game would understand your instructions.

[Washin' Glasses]

K

^^Good Points^^
I look at this game and see the objective of it and think it will be complete crap, but somehow this game is addictive and slightly erotic. I liked how the dude started sweating when you get a really low score and the game is pretty fun to play! It's also got good graphics and the gameover screen is pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said, the game sounds lame. Washing dishes will probably turn some people off form even trying this game, even though it is a quality piece of work.

[Bacoman]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it's not a very buggy game, that's a good thing. There are bugs though. The graphics are also a good point in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, you can rapid fire with no consequence by holding down the space button. This makes punching rather useless as it is never used in a practical sense. The sound effects are really annoying and overused and though I like Bouff, the song just doesn't fit in this game, or any Flash game for that matter.

[Waka Laka Dodge]

K

^^Good Points^^
I saw this from viewing your submission in NG ALPHAS, which seems to be a much better game than this one is, hopefully on schedule for tommorow. The song was decent, but it doesn't really belong in a flash game. I'm sure people won't like the song as much as they like dancing to it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game is really hard, as I've already seen people wrote. The black thing moves way too fast. I've lasted about three seconds at most. Hope to see the new edition soon, and please don't delete this one...I lose so many reviews that way. :(

Jimtopia responds:

I think you'll be pleasently surprised with the new version, so keep looking.

[mouse fx]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a very neat submission. Having multiple music choices is very nice in this game and the mouse effects are very cool looking. This game is very absorbing. I see you even added a bunch more since last night, which is nice. Nice job, k?

^^Needs Improving^^
You should put it into the instructions how to change effects. Most people don't read descriptions to games so won't know how to change it. Luckily I reread it and changed my mind to protect it.

[Kill Smile!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the music was pretty good, and the ending "finish him" sound was pretty nice addition. The game is pretty fun to play and the drawings aren't half bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is really short...seems like more of a demo. You should add some more levels or difficulties or something, because as it is right now, this game doesn't have much replay value.

AngryFaic responds:

Yeah, this was really only for people who are bored, who have a webcam, a minute and a face to kill.

[Purgatory Simulator 13]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess the intro isn't bad. You made that interesting with the sound effects and many different drawings.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess the joke isn't bad, but seriously, this doesn't really serve a purpose. Plus the fact that this is 1.5mb and nothing really happens aside from the short introduction. Learn to compress music before you submit another one.

[SF3 Scene Creator]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, this isn't bad. You have five different backgrounds for people to use, which is nice, and all of the images you used were both big and high quality. The music wasn't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, I don't understand this "Please wait...." thing you added for five seconds. I just waited for the thing to load and now you want me to wait again? That's not right. Anyway I don't really like how the items are all scattered throughout the stage, it's just harder to get everything off of the stage. You should start them all off above in the black area. There weren't too many items either.

threeD responds:

5 secs.. just wanted ythe music to end :P lol

this is a mere try to see if this idea is gonna work or not and i have got avg. of 7.5/10 which is cool so i am definitely making a next one with more stuff and also trying to get the person to select the sprites from a drop down menu..
next one might have a lot more or ALL of the characters and new stuff like different fireballs, hyper combo lightning stuff, and more..