FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[X-Shoot]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the sound effects weren't bad, and the building didn't look half bad either. Those are the best things.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game isn't very fun to play. At one point the guy would come out of the same window, I shoot, don't get any points, then for a fraction of a second he is in another window, then back in the same window again. Some type of bug. For some reason, a lot of the hits weren't counted, and what is with the baloons?

[guitar builder 1.0]

K

^^Good Points^^
Song was a pretty good one. Drawings weren't too bad either. Not a bad effort you put into this...congrats on finally passing it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like the scroll button thing...It's just awkward and would be better just to have a bigger stage. Seems like there weren't a whole lot of different designs in this. You should have more designs and maybe some type of fill color selector to give some more variety. Compress your music too.

[Mikura Dress Ups]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the music you added into this. Fit well, and wasn't a bad tune. I also liked the drawings in this. Better than a lot of dress up games and lots of detail.

^^Needs Improving^^
There just weren't enough different pieces of clothing in this one that I could enjoy. There were only a few different choices for each body part, which made this a little boring. Nothing humorous was put into this either, which makes these games more fun.

[Steady Mouse Game]

K

^^Good Points^^
I'll give you points for trying. This is much better than most people's first attempts at a game. The game worked well. Keep at it.

^^Needs Improving^^
A maze game, and not a particularly interesting game. The graphics weren't very interesting at all, and the level designs are just tired ideas used in many games like this that came before it.

[Seinfeld SB]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good soundboard overall. You had plenty of clips and you also organized them with colors to symbolize who is saying them. Nice job on that. I liked how you had the slideshow at the beginning too, and the theme music.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, make the links in your links section clickable. A lot of the clips seemed to be pretty hard to hear, and they were all varying in quality, which is never something you want to have.

BlueBlobClock responds:

Yep

[Beavis & Butt-Head Sb]

K

^^Good Points^^
I will agree with KWAS when he says that these soundboards will never go out of style. You had lots of good quotes that were funny to listen to. Not a bad job on collecting them.

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing I would suggest is to separate your quotes a little better. Separate them by character first, and try to get more quotes that are shorter and just of one character. You could use some kind of background or some better color scheme. The graphics are very bland.

BlueBlobClock responds:

Thanks for the review. Nothing witty comes to mind to touche you, so keep on rockin'.

[[ Tetris Advanced v1.0 ]]

K

^^Good Points^^
Looks like you put some effort into this. The graphics are much better than most Tetris games that are out. I liked how you added some sound effects into this, and the music is good too. Game worked well with no bugs.

^^Needs Improving^^
The reason I gave this a two is because of the fact that it is just tetris. Nothing really sticks out about this besides the graphics, and what counts is game play. This isn't fun to play since I've played it in hundreds of Tetris flash games.

[Heaven Soldier]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the best part about this was the fact that you heavenly player is in search of cheeseburgers. That made me laugh. Levels get progressively harder with more obstacles too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game has the same common mistakes a lot of games have. For one, the character sinks way too far into the clouds, which can be easily fixed. Also, when jumping on moving platforms, you have to press left or right with the platform.

[Jerkanal]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were well done. The background was really cool, and the animations were decent too. I liked the music and sound effects. Game functioned pretty well.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, your preloader doesn't work, so I was trying to hit the buttons on the menu to no avail. When I started playing, it seemed almost impossible to hit the target ships. They are way too thin and aren't really worth trying to hit until you get some weapon upgrades. The fact that there is only one type of enemy is boring too. And what is up with that big fat baby thing?