FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ultimate Peter Griffin SB]

Very well made.

^^Good Points^^
This soundboard seems near flawless. The preloader is customized very nicely and has nice graphics. In fact, the graphics throughout the entire soundboard were good. I liked the layout and colors. The sounds were very high quality and very clear and concise. This could be used to make a great prank call.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use a few more sounds to make it a little better.

[NG tank dressup!]

Not really liking this

^^Good Points^^
The only part that I found really good about this submission was the music. Pretty catchy tune, though it really has nothing to do with Newgrounds.

^^Needs Improving^^
Dress up the NG tank...this is not really fun at all. The parts you made don't match up with the original parts too well in some places. The spinning rim also looked really stupid since it was on a black background. I would have done this with some kind of slider to change between colors for each part instead of having to drag all the pieces.

[:: Dress or Undress Ed ::]

A decent game.

^^Good Points^^
I thought that the drawings were good. Looked just like the character from the TV show. There were a bunch of different items to choose from in this game, which made this pretty fun.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seemed really cramped to me. It was hard for me to navigate around and place objects somewhere when they were not being used. Give the user some extra room to move stuff around. Also, you should add some FMA music to this (the new theme is great).

rabi87 responds:

Hi hi, thanks for the review. I appreciate it! :) Hehe, I'm still trying to figure out how to organize the clothing into tabs of some sort. ^^ Again, thanks for the advice and I'm off to figure out how to insert music into flash! =o

[Frontwards Complete]

Fix the errors

^^Good Points^^
Again, this has good drawings and such. There is a myriad of items to choose from making this very entertaining and quite fun to play around with. Again, you've got a nice music choice.

^^Needs Improving^^
You've already said most of the problems I was going to put in here in your intro. I'm not sure if you know, but you can edit a submission through the "Portal Submissions" section of your Account Options page instead of resubmitting the fixed game.

fckin-clum responds:

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[Light Labyrinth]

Not half bad.

^^Good Points^^
Well, it's another maze game, however, this is pretty uniqe and more challenging than other maze games I've seen. Mainly, this is challenging and unique because you cannot see the entire maze, which makes you have to go through multiple trials. I liked how there were three parts to each level as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The maps are all pretty simplistic. There is no other goal other than to find the exit. Maybe you should add a timer or some kind of scoring system. Or perhaps other ways you have to unlock to get to the final stop. Music would be nice as well :3

[CLOCKTRIS]

A swell tetris remake

^^Good Points^^
I usually don't like Tetris games, but that is because they have nothing interesting about them. This however, is completely clock themed. It was humorous how you made the blocks out of clocks and the music was pretty funky and goes well with a tetris game. The game worked well and was fun to play (it is Tetris!).

^^Needs Improving^^
Some sound effects when a line was finished, maybe SBC's voice or something, would be a very interesting addition, and maybe some different musical choices.

[TOM FULP S.BOARD]

Not as good as Wade's

^^Good Points^^
A soundboard for Tom Fulp would definitely be something useful when making a prank call. You had a whole lot of sound clips in this, two pages packed full of them. Most of them seemed to work, and the fact that they were separated makes it much easier to navigate the cluttered stage.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lot of the sounds seem to be cut off a bit, making it hard to hear what he is saying. I didn't like the background, because it made some of the sounds hard to hear.

[WadeFulp soundboard]

XD

^^Good Points^^
This is definitely a creative idea. Though it isn't Wade's voice, you sure did capture his anger and his wrath. I thought this was very funny and could be used for a decent prank call.

^^Needs Improving^^
You could have made the buttons bigger, since there is a lot of empty space. Also, I'm not sure I like the slideshow of pictures in the middle of the screen. :s