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^^Good Points^^
Let's see, I liked the background drawings. They didn't give much detail, but they were still well done, and better than just a plain background. I thought the storyline was pretty well done, though it doesn't make much sense, I kind of liked it. The script was pretty funny as well. It gave me a few laughs.
^^Needs Improving^^
The way you drew that hand was just terrible. I know it's hard to drawn things, but you could have thought of something better to do. I didn't like how you used that strange voice. It definitely is not SBC's voice, which I find a bit annoying.