FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cheer Up! Collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
This collab was pretty awesome! It was an awesome song that you had for this, and all of the artists who took part in this were very talented in drawing and animation. Truly a great effort by everyone who took part, and definitely worth suggesting for the Collabs collection.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, really little I can say here. I would say that in the scene select you can play one scene and then go back, but that never seems to happen on any collab, so I assume its not possible.

[FUN ZONE]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty fun to watch. It was completely random, but it showed a lot of skill in drawing and animating. I'm not familiar with your other works, but from judging from this they must be half decent.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some scenes were colored in and some were not, which was kind of strange. More color is always better.

[Road Trip - Washington]

K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline wasn't too bad. I liked some of the script in this, it wasn't too bad. Also, a decent job on the voice overs.

^^Needs Improving^^
At first it was very confusing. The whole scene didn't look like an RV at all. I understand you got better by the end, but the difference is way too obvious. Your characters don't even look the same in the two minute span.

InfinateLoop responds:

Yeah, next episode will have more consistency.

[Everything's Perfect?]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, I thought this was pretty good. Your character had a funny personality to him, just the way his life was going and the way he reacted. The surprise at the ending was rather sad, but it was entertaining nonetheless.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations were a little poor, like walking.

[Splitberry Shorts]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good start for shorts. I liked the voice overs done in Speakonia, and each part of this was pretty funny and had its unexpected parts.

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing I notice is that when you play a scene from the selection screen, it plays all the scenes after that as well, which kind of defeats the purpose of having a scene select.

[Big Pussy]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very good graphics. Your drawings were very detailed and had a nice bit of quality to them. The joke was kind of funny and unexpected at the same time.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really don't like how it loops over and over. You should have added a preloader or at least some kind of replay button.

Royaledis responds:

y would i want to give you a choice to watch it again? just watch it again beeyotch!

[Afro_Stud - The Album]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a great movie compared to the last few you've made that didn't really make any sense. I really liked Afro's singing. Sex on the beach had to be the best though. How much of it was actually from your other movies? I know Barbie Girl is, but what about the rest?

^^Needs Improving^^
The birthday ending still didn't make that much sense, but nothing does anymore.

Murray responds:

"I know Barbie Girl is, but what about the rest?"

None of the other songs were from my other flashes, although the backgrounds were.

"The birthday ending still didn't make that much sense, but nothing does anymore."

The facts page explains about that ending. Thanks for reviewing.

[(2005) Bungee Jumping!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not too bad. The voice overs were good, and the acting was pretty well done as well. Seems like you put some time into animating this, as there was some detailed animation in here.

^^Needs Improving^^
The quality was a little low, especially towards the end where there was a lot of movement.

[Tom's Wedding Day!]

K

^^Good Points^^
For a movie that you just started last night, this really turned out quite good. The graphics are surprisingly good, especially the people you drew. I feel you transferred them into Flash well. Same with the voice overs. I like how you captured Wade anger. Funny movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
A bit short, but for the time you had with this, not bad one bit.

Rudy responds:

Thanks for your review, I'm glad you liked the animation. I like that it had all the same voices because it added humor. I tried pretty hard on this one :) So it all adds up in the end.

[Magic Putty]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good stop motion movie right here. The quality of the images used to make this was very high, much higher than most stop-motion movies. It was very neat how you made this, it looked very complicated to make this exactly as you did. Great job on taking the time to entertain NG.

^^Needs Improving^^
A bit short for the filesize, but I guess that is what you get for having such high quality.