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^^Good Points^^
The storyline wasn't too bad. I liked some of the script in this, it wasn't too bad. Also, a decent job on the voice overs.
^^Needs Improving^^
At first it was very confusing. The whole scene didn't look like an RV at all. I understand you got better by the end, but the difference is way too obvious. Your characters don't even look the same in the two minute span.