FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

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K

^^Good Points^^
I really like games like Super Smash TV and Berzerker, and it's definitely a good idea for you to make a Flash adaptation of these games, I think it could be cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
The controls are not that good. I like the spread direction and fire controls, but for whatever reason shooting didn't come easy. Probably something in the coding, but it never shot when I hit the button the first time.

Undisclosure responds:

Thank you for the helpful review. I'm glad you expanded on why there was problems with the controls (previous reviews just mention that there was problems with the controls with no other explanations. Of course, I was intending for the player to hold down the shoot key rather than tapping it repeatedly.)

If I make a successor to this game, I will be sure to fix the control problem as well as the lag.

[Three dancing fairies]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were really cool. The 3-d effects were surprisingly high quality and grabbing the screen and moving it around was really cool and unique. Game works well, though math is kind of lame to use.

^^Needs Improving^^
With such good graphics I was hoping that for such a grueling task of adding two digit numbers I would have gotten some tits out of it.

[Attractors New]

K

^^Good Points^^
The added backgrounds were nice, though most of them looked like crap. Lots of music in this as well, which is cool. A bit fun to play around with.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's really nothing new you have here. I've seen pretty much the same thing before, and this one didn't really add too much on top of that.

[ShipDodgem]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the graphics. They were simple, but still they were kind of cool. The game had a good base to it, but could use some more features to it. Cool highscore list is nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, the game doesn't get any harder as it goes on, which makes it rather boring. No sound effects didn't help either. Also, way too many lives. Pretty sure I could have gone for hours if I didn't get bored of it.

[Cosmic Blast]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the different game modes in this, alternatives are always good in games. The graphics were clean and the game was pretty functional. Good sound effects as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The game play is a little bit iffy. I don't really like the idea of not being able to shoot at things not aimed at, seeing how I have no control over what I aim at. Also, the up button should move the ship in the way it faces, not up the screen regardless. Hard to control that way.

[Waxbeetle soundboard]

K

^^Good Points^^
There are a lot of sounds scattered on this whole thing, and they all work from what I have tested and are labeled well. Could be good for a prank call. Volumes were even too, which was good.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't attractive at all. Other than that you really need more phrases in here. It might be hard to make a realistic sentence with just a bunch of single words.

randomaster0 responds:

Thanks for the feedback, this is literally the first time I have ever used flash so I'm not that good with it. I'm currently in the middle of another soundboard it will be slightly better; more sounds and better layout.

[Ultmate Airhockey]

K

^^Good Points^^
It's challenging to say the least. You need good reaction time to play this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing too ultimate about this one. No difficulty settings were integrated, so your choices were nil. The sound effects were annoying and played late, and I just didn't get the airhockey feel to this. The physics were not the same. It's basically just a dressed up pong.

[AstroTrigger]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good rendition of Asteroids, with a few additions that I like. Multiple weapons was a must in a new version, and having a shield system instead of one hit kill type thing in the original was a great idea. Really liked the backgrounds.

^^Needs Improving^^
Different game types would be cool, such as survival or something like that.

[The Expert's Guide - NG 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
You had good music in this tutorial. Other than that I liked how easy it was to navigate this. No flaws in that section. The added quizzes were kind of cool as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seemed a little tacky to me. Most of the core information can be found right here on NG, and some of your advice is just unnecessary. For example, when you gave a detailed description of what each numerical vote should be. I don't think people are so stupid that they won't know what number to vote. Also, crew movies always get 5's, not 0's.

[MSN Guy Maker]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess you had a good amount of options for each variable. The game worked well and had a low filesize.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really lame, I didn't vote to pass it. For one, the graphics were low quality. Your picture was blurry around the edges and the drawings weren't very detailed. Not a whole bunch of options and relatively little replay value involved in this either.