FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Find Boo!]

(title in work)

A pretty good game, similar to Where's Waldo? The interface was nice. I like that you made the whole scene a button so you couldn't find him just by watching for the cursor to change. The scenes were all well used. Lots of stuff hidden in the scenes to make this game quite difficult. And it was pretty difficult. Nice job.

[Clock maze game 09]

(title in work)

A very basic maze game. You incorporated all of the tricks that are normally put into these games, so it was nothing new. The thing that really bothers me the most is that you put Clock in front of this, submitted it on Clock Day, yet there was not a clock or speakonia speech to be found within the whole thing. I would have given this a much higher score just in spirit of the day had you put some Clock related things in here.

Review Request Club.

Elder responds:

Oh, um. Ok. Well, I just put clock because it was clock day. Just to go with the mood of clock day, y'know? If it really starts to bother you, I guess I could change the title.

Thanks for the review. :D

[Jimmy does dodgeball]

(title in work)

A good concept for an avoiding game. It wasn't that great to play though. For one thing, there was no sound, voice overs or sound effects in the cut scenes, which I thought was really disappointing. The game play was a bit off too. I thought the hit detection was pretty lame, and the items should be there to help you, not protect you 100%.

[Covert Front 1]

(title in work)

This was a nice point and click adventure game, and the war setting was definitely a cool one to base this upon. Graphically this was pretty well done. The drawings were all very detailed and carefully done. I would have like to have seen some more animating though. A fun game overall.

[Machine Gun Mayhem]

(title in work)

This game was pretty bad in just about every aspect. Graphically it was rather boring, and the scene never changes, nor do you ever move to a different location, which made this rather boring. Also, most of the enemies body isn't even vulnerable to bullets. It seems that you have to click them in a small area on their left side to actually hit them. Their whole body should have been vulnerable to make this game better.

[Are You a True Fan: RE2]

(title in work)

The main thing that needs to be improved is the graphics. The buttons look pretty bad against the background. Needs something more subtle for the buttons. Also, I really don't like how you have to go back to start every time you miss a question, especially with that slow introduction.

altare responds:

It's been a few years and I took a class on graphic design since I uploaded this. I haven't been working on flash too much, but I might give this another shot.

[Ultimate Flash Guide]

(title in work)

Not one of the best tutorials I've seen. It has some decent information in here, but I think you left a lot out as well. For example, you don't talk at all about using onionskin technique for FBF animations. Also, some more pictures of exactly what you are doing would be nice. For example when you explain making buttons. Some picture to go along with the explanation would be good.

[SBC Portal Offender]

(title in work)

A nice little game here. It's got a simple concept with a good CC theme added in. I was quite entertained by the fact that the hour hand worked properly with the minute hand. The game was quite challenging too. Only thing you could have done better on was the graphics.

VicBiss responds:

Well, I made the game in about 4 hours to be in time for clock day so I couldn't make stellar graphics, but thanks alot anyways!

[Bert and Greg's treasure]

(title in work)

Not a bad game. It was somewhat interesting, though rather annoying how the guy just keeps walking onto mines when you direct him around. Way too easy to die in this game I think. Also, I'm pretty sure I got stuck inside of Greg's house and couldn't get out. It was quite sad.

[Sudoku 2007]

(title in work)

There doesn't seem to be much wrong with this one at all. There are many different difficulties for each player and the interface is rather nice. Graphically very nice and the sound effects were cool as well. Absolutely nothing wrong I can see here.