FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Moon Fun Sucks]

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^^Good Points^^
Hah, this was pretty good! I have no idea why the score on it is so low. It's much better than most stuff around this score range. I really liked moon surfing, and fighting moon robots in a bar. It was quite funny all the different scenarios you had here, and I really liked how you let the user move on when they were done, very nice job. I liked the drawings as well, they were pretty unique and well colored. Also some good animation of what you did have.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really shouldn't be listed as a game, it confused me in the beginning, but you should have made this into a series of some sort. I would love it.

[Super Bounce Ball v.1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad idea for a game. It could be fun with some improvements. I thought the sound effects were prety good and the game seemed to work without any major bugs.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I was playing this game for a good two minutes getting frustrated and saying "OK, that one clearly went right in the middle of that square!" then I found out that by hitting the "Start" button on the menu, I didn't actually start the game, but just entered some type of sick and twisted practice mode, where you cannot score. Once I actually saw the start button that actually started the game, I started and had no more fun than I did when I was practicing. Moral of the story is to make the second play buttom more obvious and also to put in some more interesting game modes.

[The Holly-Lloyd Squares]

K

^^Good Points^^
Catchy graphics, and that is about all for this game.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game doesn't make much sense to me. You get a question, and then the characters say something completely unrelated that is really hard to make out anyway. You can't really win by ansering either agree or disagree since the responses don't make sense anyway.

[Man-o-Rope]

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^^Good Points^^
Definitely an original idea for a game. Guy hanging from a rope trying to collect burgers. Not bad drawings either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This game is really hard to play because it's hard to tell when you are going to touch a hamburger and when you are not. Part of the man's body is unresponsive, but it's really hard to tell exactly where. I also don't like how he doesn't change directions when moving left. There should also be some type of screen that tells you when you complete a level. I had no idea whether I thouched a hamburger and died or got the broom at first.

[Cartoon Dressup ver 1.1b]

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^^Good Points^^
Some of the drawings weren't too bad. I liked how you drew the different hairs. That's a tough thing to draw, but you did it well. I also like how you separated the clothing into types.

^^Needs Improving^^
Filesize is way too big, and definitely not worth that crappy music. Compress the music, or better yet, just take it out altogether. The music off button doesn't work on the credits page. This wasn't really interesting because it's just an unnamed Joe Schmoe, which can be fun, but you didn't really provide enough comical items to make it funny.

[The Mind Reader]

K

^^Good Points^^
Kind of funny that I actually thought it worked the first time, and you tricked my by replacing the cards, but I figured out quickly what was going on. I'm sure this trick will get by on some people.

^^Needs Improving^^
Once you find out how this works, it's really not impressive at all, though what should I have exptected? Real magic from a flash movie? hah!

[Kutoi Ronin flash engine]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this was how you animated the ninja. I'm surprised his legs actually moved when he walked, but they really weren't animated that well. Very primitive.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your directions aren't very clear. You say the attacks have to be synchronized. What does that mean? I just jammed on the "S" button when I was standing next to stuff. It seemed to work fine. There are only two different combos, not even sure if I got them to work and there relaly isn't much to do in this game. There are about five platform and maybe four non-moving, non-attacking enemies that you train on. Not the best idea for a game and also, when you fall down, nothing happens.

[teledeath]

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^^Good Points^^
Ok, if I really had to stretch it, I would say that the game had decent background graphics and it did work...well parts of it worked atleast.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seriously this was horribly done. It's so obvious that you just cut and pasted the teletubies on here, since you can see the green spot on top of their heads easily and it shows in the background when they first move in. There is no good music, or atleast no obvious choices *hint*teletuby theme *hint*. Anyway the game was incredibly easy, simply click a few times and it is over. Nothing too dramatic here. Kill the Sun button doesn't seem to work, just plays a gun shot once and that is it, and the NG asassins link doesn't work.

[[webcam game] Puppy BASH]

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^^Good Points^^
Though this is kind of cruel, it's still rather fun to play! The game worked well and I like how the puppy responded to you well. The music was fitting. Fun game, and good interaction and rules.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics could be improved a little bit. A bigger problem is that the game doesn't have much in the way of replay value. Once you play it once, it really isn't that fun to play a second time, much less a third time. Try to add some more game options.

[(Naruto) Dress up Sakura]

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^^Good Points^^
First, very good drawings. They stick out in my mind as being very well done and better than most dress up games. There are lots of clothing choices, also drawn very well and varying a lot. Everything seemed to work well, or atleast the stuff that I tested out, and everything fit fine.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really as humorous as I like to see dress up games. Add some humorous clothing, since that is what makes a dress up game good. Also, there should be a sound off button, sicne that music is kind of lame.