FattyWhale's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dødslegge]

(title in work)

You had a pretty good mix of drums and guitar here, and both were equally good and equally represented in this song. It sounded really cool when it was put all together. Not really a fan of the ending though, it seemed a bit abrupt as if you just decided to stop with this. Good job though.

Bonemill responds:

THanks man, the production is twenty times better than all of my old crap. The drums ended abruptly and I figured if I ended it like that people would still be headbanging after it was over like. I WANT MOAR.

[red lite]

(title in work)

Not too bad, but not very memorable either. It was incredibly repetitive and nothing much really changed throughout the entire song. A bit boring for my tastes. Definitely needs some more powerful and memorable parts to it that stray a bit more from the normal beat felt throughout.

snayk responds:

I guess house music isn't really your thing. Most of it is repetitive.

There are several changes in this track just to keep it fresh so it doesn't get too boring, but of course not everyone will like it. I'm extremely pleased with this song and think it's one of my best. It's definitely among the best of my dance songs.

For me, there ARE powerful and memorable moments. It depends on the person, but that's how it is with all music, and I understand that this piece just didn't do it for you. It's supposed to be a relaxed dance song; soothing and easy to listen to.

Thanks for the review.

[Sword of Lamneth City Theme]

(title in work)

Actually sounds very good. Definitely sounds like it could go well with a video game, though I'm not sure exactly which game this is supposed to go for. The only problem I found was that it doesn't loop very well at all. Very disjointed when replaying. Definitely need a calmer end to this to go with the calm introduction.

suppi responds:

the problem with looping is the player, not the song. but i see what you mean by it.

[--[[Move]]--]

(title in work)

Neat song you have here. It has a really unique beat and feel to it. I liked the mix of many different instruments throughout to make it more interesting. Best was the brass though. Very professionally made, great job.

UberKuri responds:

Ty, makes me smile to hear that lol.

[Why - Live/Accoustic/Unplugged]

Not bad

I realize this was a live show, so the audio can't be that great of quality. The guitar work was really good, definitely some skill there. The vocals however, I didn't really like. Sounded a little strained to me and a bit unnatural. I don't know what work you've done, but maybe you should try some other tone or something.

Naitzmic responds:

Thanks for the review.
I agree with just about everything you said,
so this won't be much of a response...

Your input is much appreciated though.

[--[[Shiet]]--]

Neat

When this first started, it sounded like some crappy hip-hop beat and I wasn't really diggin' it. Towards the middle though, I really started to get into this. You slowly built it up until it was a mixture of hip hop and mostly hard techno beats. It really made for a cool effect that really made this a unique piece.

UberKuri responds:

Ty, glad you, eventually, liked it xD

[--[[Contemplate]]--]

Neat

This was a really cool track. I especially like how it built up towards the end and got a bit more intense as it went on. Also really liked the bass guitar throughout this. Very chill submission and very professionally made. I really liked it.

UberKuri responds:

Glad you liked it, and ty for reviewing my music =D

[Flight To Havana]

(title in work)

Definitely a pretty catchy song. It's got a real happy and playful sound to it, which I like, and it gives it that exotic island feel, I guess you could say. The only thing i don't really like is the fact that it is quite repetitive. Until you get to that one part towards the end, it's pretty much the same thing over and over. Needed some more diversity to it.

UberKuri responds:

Mmmyeah, seems like the repetitiveness was a problem for some :\

Ty for the review =]

[Mandatory Suicide]

Ok

I'm not sure exactly how you made this, and I'm not sure I am familiar with the original, but nonetheless, this was a pretty sweet cover you've got here. It was very intense and powerful throughout. I definitely think you've got some talent in this, great job. The guitar solo was awesome, though that should be expected of a Slayer cover. The only thing I noticed was that it sounded a little disjointed in parts. Though I'm not sure if this is how it is supposed to be as I've never heard the original.

Bonemill responds:

nah its just i suck at timing lol. Thanks for the sweet review man.

[Jxl180 - Drum Loop]

Ok

It was a decent loop. It was a fast pace and had an upbeat sound to it. However, it was just drums and nothing else. Loops need to be more interesting for their short length in my opinion.

Review Request Club

jxl180 responds:

Thank you. Next time i'll add more instruments.