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[Adventure of a ninja 2]

(title in work)

Hehe, well I guess the only thing I really enjoyed about this was how the ninja apparently could fly by hanging on to a broom. You need to bring this interesting humor to something better. The graphics were pretty poor in this, so work on that. Also, try not to make this so linear. There are no options of what to do in this, so it's really not a game. Just a movie where you control the speed.

Lare responds:

Thanks, I'll try to improve.

[Space Maze v1]

(title in work)

Pretty boring, even for a maze game! You need to add something more interesting than just walls to avoid. Perhaps some moving objects or keys to unlock. Graphics weren't bad considering the filesize. Only goes up to level 5 also. You should definitely add more levels to the next version.

TzTok-Jad responds:

yea this version goes to level 5 , i also added moving object in v2 will be out soon I'm changing up a lot of stuff in it

[Black Asylum]

(title in work)

A good start for an escape game. Still needs some work though. I liked the music, however whenever you get caught the music begins again and the original play doesn't stop, so you get this overlapping music. Also the guards seem to have too large of a field of vision compared to how quickly you move.

netahsatno responds:

I know don't expect a perfect first game when I am 13 and live in the getto.

[Sunshine Meets B V]

(title in work)

Wow this brings me back to the good days, back when sunshine was still alive. This also reminds me that I forgot to make a movie for this past sunshine day :( Anyway, great movie, awesome music. Could have used some more scenery though.

Sidorio responds:

TENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

[Da Pzzl! demo]

(title in work)

I liked this puzzle game. It was pretty challenging, which is more fun than not challenging. I got stuck on the third level. pi/2 is approximately 1.7...but not sure what that means in the puzzle. Overall a good job of making a logic puzzle game. Hope to see the full version soon.

Polioman responds:

Working on it!

[Number Matching!]

(title in work)

Hmm... A decent concept as a little time wasting game. It definitely has its challenge. I would have had the number randomized each time. It's kind of boring waiting for the first digit to be 9 every time. Also, labeling this as rhythm based kind of disappointed me.

VioletVulpine responds:

ok.

[SneakyPizzShoppingCenter1]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music. It reminded me of Earthbound for some reason.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really see the point of this. It was a little confusing at first when I got 404 every time I clicked buy it now. Other than that, seems like a lot of inside jokes or something, because I didn't find it very funny.

RRC

ZiggyZack99 responds:

OK.

[BBS Awesome Points Quiz]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Calculators are generally pretty fun to play with. The NG graphical theme was of course necessary and you did a fair job presenting this.

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing I hate about these quiz games is when you ask the question "what is your special status". 99.9% of people who play this game are going to get no points for that status. I think the questions are better when they are more relevant to the users playing. Also, that preloader looked like crap.

ZiggyZack99 responds:

You get 1 point for regular userness.

[TF2 Tutorial - Medic]

(title in work)

A very basic tutorial if you ask me. I have over 130 hours logged playing as medic, and I honestly can't believe you have more than 10 with the content of this tutorial. You don't go over anything really important, like WHEN and WHY to uber, when to pull out your bonesaw, how to stay alive...basic things you learn when playing medic for so long. Also, demo man is always better than heavy to taking sentries, even if there are 3+ because heavies most certainly DO fly, and when they do they are useless. Secondly, you should never uber a spy, that is just the dumbest thing I've ever heard, because it will most likely just alert the other team that there is an uber behind them. Same thing with ubering an engineer. In pub games it's a big no-no. Even in a clan match or scrimmage I would say no, unless he is your absolute last chance to defend a point or with the game.

Bun-Lord responds:

This is my tactics that I use, and I have 60 hours played as medic and I am the best medic in my clan. If you dont like my tactics, write your own tut. :|

[Pogger]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The levels vary from each other in difficulty and design. I really don't like how Pac-Man and Frogger are generally the same level over and over. The new levels are definitely refreshing.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit disappointing for the joining of these two. I thought you could have maybe had something to collect during each level, which would add more of a pac-man feel to it. This was basically just Frogger, except playing as Pac-Man. Keep working at it!

Kieran123 responds:

I can sort of see what your saying about not having enough of a pacman feel but I did try and put that in the 4th level wen u gotta collect dots.