FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[UltimateGamerQuiz demo]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
You have a pretty good quiz here. It was a bit more interesting than most quizzes, as this one had some nice animation to go with it as a visual aid. The questions were pretty well spread out among different systems and such.

^^Needs Improving^^
The questions were pretty easy to me, and I think to most they would be as well. Needs some harder questions, and perhaps a system where you don't have to go back to the start if you mess up.

[The Road to King]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a pretty good job on one of your first games. The graphics were pretty refreshing, and made the game more playable. It reminded me of the desert level of SMB3 for obvious reasons. Simple gameplay, and not too many bugs, though I will mention some below. Keep working on it!

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, jumping was a little strange, when next to a low platform. Sometimes, I guess your foot hits a low platform, stopping you, which is just annoying. Also, I found that you can fall through vertically stretched platforms. Not sure if you meant for this, but it seems more like a bug to me. One more thing: you may want to consider using WASD rather than the arrow keys, as it is just easier when using the mouse.

Abs55 responds:

Thanks for your review. There are some little bugs like the jumping which I will improve for my next game. I never intended the user to walk on the vertical platform as I wanted the person to fall or jump over it. I will consider using the WASD keys next time and will try to let the user pick which keys, he/she wants to use.

Thanks again :)

[Indiana Bones part 1]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I guess if you have some patience this game isn't so bad. Unfortunately, I have pretty much none.

^^Needs Improving^^
The first few minutes was just a really boring and poorly made movie. Everything seem drawn out and boring until I actually got to do something interactive and control something in the game. That lasted for about three seconds, then more boring cutscenes. Seriously, make your games more interesting.

[Learn andPlay bass *Unfin]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
There really aren't any redeeming things in this particular submission.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, this game isn't just "unfinished" it's hardly even there. You have one string and about a quarter of another. Not nearly enough to submit as a game, as you can't really do what it is meant to do. Half of the buttons don't work, and the audio quality is terrible. You should definitely make the strings larger too. Clicking on them is a chore, since they are so short.

[00B-Part 1]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The graphics actually looked pretty good in the first few scenes. I thought this was going to be a lot better considering what I saw in the first scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, the game is really short. You have one really quick scenario where you shoot a few people, and then on to the boss. The boss is really quite silly too. Once he shoots the rocket launcher at you, you can't really shoot at him. You should at least be able to shoot down the rockets or something.

[Bunkles (Deluxe Edition)]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
It's a pretty cool game for picking the death of either this guy or a baby. You had some interesting ideas in here and it was kind of cool how you animated this from one option to the other.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like the "Privacy" thing over the one scene. It is more or less just an excuse for you not to animate that part.

[Fart Dictionary V. 1.0]

(title in work)

This is the same exact thing as the other one you submitted. You could have at least had something different between the two. Also, this would make for pretty lame prank calls, since in my opinion, to have a prank call, one must actually have a conversation, not just fart into the telephone. Not very entertaining.

[Fart Dictionary]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The names were pretty creative. I don't understand most of them or why exactly they are named as such, but whatever.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really wasn't that entertaining to me. The graphical layout was nothing special, and actually clicking the buttons just wasn't really entertaining to me. The humor just wasn't there.

[Pirate fun!]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well, it was kind of...interesting. The "argh" added in was kind of funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a pretty boring game. There was really no fun involved in it. You shoot at pirates over and over. The graphics aren't very good, which didn't help you out at all, and the game play was just boring and repetitive.

[make ur own saiyan]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The filesize was pretty low, so at least I didn't have to wait for this to load very long. Also, some music in there, that makes it more interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
There wasn't really much to this one. It had only a few items in it, most of which were very generic. You should have had a whole lot more items, as well as maybe some different colored things as well. Make this more customizable.