FattyWhale's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Melvin The Mushroom 2]

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^^Good Points^^
It had a certain charm to it. The music was very fun to listen to. The sixteen bit graphics were kind of cool looking too. Needs some improving though.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seems a bit buggy to me. In some spots I got stopped by invisible walls. Also, if you jump on a moving platform, you should move with it, instead of staying stationary. Another thing, the level designs weren't that good. Some of them were just mindless jumping up staircases.

[ClickDragType]

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^^Good Points^^
This was a really tough puzzle game you have here. I guess what made it tough was the fact that you were given no clues at all as to what you were supposed to do. You pretty much just had to mess around with various things and see what you could figure out. Got to the third level before giving up.

^^Needs Improving^^
Maybe you should make the directions a little clearer. At least tell people what the object of the game is. I was completely confused when I first started playing.

[Knight Rider Quiz]

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^^Good Points^^
I liked the graphics in this. You had a pretty nice background and some nice rollover effects with the mouse. The animations after answering were cool as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics didn't have much to do with KR though. It looked very generic to me and didn't vary at all from question to question. Also, the music was kind of annoying, just the way it was set up to play.

[Visual Online -logic game]

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^^Good Points^^
Not a bad game at all. The different game modes were a nice addition, and I felt that the game play had a pretty good feeling to it, that made it pretty fun to play. The sound effects fit well too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I can say is that sometimes, it seemed as if there was no way to progress except to make a wrong move. You can just be in deadlock with the game, and have no other recourse to get some new blocks.

[F.A.C.E Comic maker demo]

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^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty awesome submission. It was really interactive, making it very easy to make a pretty good looking scene. I liked how all of the drawings looked like they came from a professional comic maker. Very easy to get into and start working with.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not much really. I thought it would be neat to put your own copyright at the bottom. It would make more sense instead of claiming every screenshot from this game as your own.

[LINES!]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Interesting puzzle game. Kind of fun to try and arrange each level and get to the next one. Kept me interested for a while.

^^Needs Improving^^
The instructions are very unclear. I had no idea exactly what to do when I first started out. Also, the giant red smiley face in the center was a bit annoying. It kind of blended in with some of the lines in the outline. Just a bit of a distraction.

[Shoot For The Sky]

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^^Good Points^^
A very cool and unique shooting game. It was pretty challenging, especially when you got further, as you had to account for a lot of wind at times. Great graphics and music. Just wish the highscore list was still working so I could see how I compare.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, highscore list is no longer available. Also, I think the reason that a lot of people are saying this is bad is because of the directions. They are very unclear and do not mention that you have to aim to jump from cloud to cloud. The first few times I shot, I thought I went right through the cloud, but apparently I didn't as I fell right down. Should point that out in the directions.

[Dress Up Tutorial::Explnd]

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^^Good Points^^
All in all, a pretty solid tutorial you made. The graphics were pretty smooth, and each frame was about as packed as it could be with information and instructions. Nice idea to add a simple game in the beginning as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Maybe you could have explained the AS a little bit more, just so people know what they are putting in does.

[Invader Zim Dressup]

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^^Good Points^^
I thought it was a cool idea to add a soundboard into this as well, which added some extra entertainment into what was a pretty boring dress up game. Everything worked just fine though.

^^Needs Improving^^
Dressing up was nothing that great. I don't understand what all of the white backgrounds and such surrounding a lot of the pieces was for. It just complicated things more, and made the game more linear in giving less freedom as to exactly where to place the parts.

[Moosh'd Anime Tutorial]

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^^Good Points^^
Overall a pretty good tutorial. The interface and navigation was really good. Lots of topics were covered in this, and you've obviously got some skill in drawing, so I feel comfortable taking advice from you.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lot of it just seemed like "practice" and not much actual advice. Don't get me wrong, a lot of good info in here, but it could have been more beginner oriented.