FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bbq-ish christmas]

K

^^Good Points^^
It's always nice to see an appearance by BBQ, who doesn't come around too much anymore. Dressing up as santa is really an interesting thing for BBQ to be doing, and quite scary looking! I liked the appearance of Mr. T, and his sound clip was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the storyline really wasn't too great. It was really random, Mr. T was completely unexpected. I was hoping for more to focus on BBQ, and I really thought this would be a little bit longer with more storyline.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Yeah ive been a little lazy lately. But even i need a break every once in a while.

[The Needlekeeper 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
The animations in this are slightly better. The atrocious walking animation in the first episode was much improved. The sound effects were cool, added to the eerie mood, as did the music, like the last episode. Some interesting images in here.

^^Needs Improving^^
The reason I gave this such a low grade, is because I think there was just a complete lack of effort in this movie. You submitted the first two months ago, and this got no better. Seriously, the mouth is animated up to five seconds after the voice overs stop. It's just annoying to see easy mistakes in movies like this, and you've done nothing to fix your mistakes.

ErgoEngan responds:

Well these movies aren´t new there old and i got them from an old file

[the INTERNAUT]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, definitely a very unique image. I'm not sure what exactly is going on in this, but it's really quite interesting. I can only imaging what is going on in those VR goggles. The music added to the humor as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seems more like a BBS post than a movie. It's just a picture with some music, not really a movie at all, and because of that I can't really rate this too highly. Sure it was funny and all, but it just doesn't show much time and effort.

DanPaladick responds:

i am truly envious of your reviewing abilities, thank you for being non-biased and informative

[SM:SunMafiaIntro (Undone)]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music. Not often I hear a song like "Festival of Ghost" in a submission, so good job on having a unique tune. The graphics weren't too bad. Your characters were drawn good, and some other parts had good details too, like the lightsabers. The animations weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This seems to be just a bunch of random events to me. There isn't much concurrence in the events that unfold in this movie, which I didn't like. And really, I didn't like the idea of a Sun Mafia. Just seems like a cheap ripoff to me. So far, you haven't earned my respect.

Review Request Club.

RaspberrySun responds:

...TheSunMafia...
Is a group,which wants to help the cc and make allies with them. thanks for the review though.

[The Newgrounds Tutorial]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was good. It was nice and loud and high quality. You sure didn't compromise the quality of this. The image quality was likewise, pretty high.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not a very good tutorial compared to others. And you submit it at this time, after the new layout and levels were originally supposed to be released? It is known that they are coming soon, at which time this tutorial will become obsolete and have completely wrong information in it. I don't really like how you made this like a movie. A tutorial with a menu and sections is much easier to reference so one doesn't have to watch the whole thing to get certain information. Also, some of the information is not explained very well. I didn't like your level synopsis, and the B/P thing wasn't very clear either.

Review Request Club

Sidorio responds:

Thanks...I guess.

[Cour&hisGang#2]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very strange movie, but I liked it. It was neat how you made this a very quick paced movie in the beginning, so fast I had little idea what was going on, then slowed it down a lot with the SBC scene. This was pretty funny throughout, and the added introduction scene was necessary.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you used that "whoosh" sound effect much too often. It really started to annoy me.

CourgetteClock responds:

Thanks dude.
Yes this project kicked of as a realy short spam movie so it all movied pretty fast.
And for the woosh, well I just love that sound =3

[LL-Randomized]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad Lock Legion movie for Lock Day. I liked the graphics, good shading. The music was good. High enough to hear, yet low enough not in interfere with the speakonia, which was also good. Storyline was pretty decent. I liked when Corgette got to the snack table and just wanted to eat snacks.

^^Needs Improving^^
I have to say that I was pretty disappointed with where this movie ended. I really was surprised with seeing the preloader come back up. This should have been longer.

CourgetteClock responds:

Yeah I was pretty angry when my computer flipped, this is all I could save from the movie.
And again, thanks for the comments dude.

[Peanut Butter´s Quest]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like how your description depicts a very epic movie, but the movie itself was really quite informal and random. The graphics were good as always, no need to comment on that. The effects in this, like the white noise were good additions, and the dance scene at the end was pretty neat.

^^Needs Improving^^
I usually don't have a problem with this, but for some reason, I had some trouble hearing what was being said between the three characters against the white background.

CourgetteClock responds:

Heh thanks but two words: "Spam Movie"

[Cour&hisGang#1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another good movie. This one with Clocks, but still just as good as anything you've made. The graphics are good, of course. You had good camera stuff and I liked how you did stuff with the clock faces, and how the viewer could still see that from behind. I liked the music in this, very cool for background music. The best scene was definitely from the sitcom style. This is definitely a series you should have continued.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some of the sound effects seemed a little weird, I didn't really like them.

CourgetteClock responds:

Thanks, yes it is indeed the idea this series goes on so you will see more of this.

[LL-LockDay Trailer]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music in this movie. A cool tune from The Matrix, and it is a good song for preview movies such as this. The graphics were pretty good. You had some common clocks in here, all drawn and shaded well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't know I really like the idea of a preview movie for Lock Day. Regardless of that, you didn't really give a whole lot of information on the movie, but then again, I guess most previews don't. But you should have made the text go a little faster.

CourgetteClock responds:

Yeah this was a failed project down at LL to make lockday trailers.

Anyway, thanks for the comments.