FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ClockDay Is Saved]

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^^Good Points^^
An excellent clock day movie. Can't believe I haven't seen it until today. Guess I should have checked the collection earlier. The graphics were definitely very impressive. The detail in the drawings were top notch, and I really liked the nuclear explosion effect. The ending was kind of sad, though ironic at the same time, which made it funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think some parts were a little drawn out, like him running through the streets. Just got a little boring.

Creatus responds:

Its perfect. Don't lie.

[Destination Moon]

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^^Good Points^^
It was kind of entertaining. I thought the song sounded pretty cool...haven't heard much from They Might Be Giants. The clips were kind of cool as they were generally relative to the lyrics.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was going to say that the filesize should be lowered, but then I saw how low the quality was. Hopefully the music was the culprit of that, which can be fixed.

Starberry responds:

THIS IS SO DAMN OLD

[Lilium]

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^^Good Points^^
That was a very enticing movie you made. I think the music was perfect. It sounds very dark, and the "Shadow" character of course mirrors this quite well. The drawings were very detailed and looked good. I feel that the storyline was extremely interesting, and I thought it was a very fun movie to watch. Leaves me with a raised eyebrow, but I applaud you.

^^Needs Improving^^
There really wasn't a whole lot of animation in the characters. Just large tweens and camera movement.

[ORMAN]

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^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty cool. The graphics were pretty nice, with the shading and really close scenes. The storyline was pretty good, and I would like to see a sequel, though it doesn't look likely.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not very long. I think you could have continued this for a little while longer and still have it be pretty good. I especially say this since the sequel still hasn't come in over two years.

[Bush + Blair: GAY BAR]

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^^Good Points^^
It started out pretty decent. I liked Blair's dancing moves, and Bush's crazy eyes gave me a smile. Got old pretty quick though.

^^Needs Improving^^
You really milked the animations as much as you could. Boring repetition of the same things over and over really didn't make this too interesting to watch. Needs something more interesting, especially during the guitar solo.

[The fall of the samurai]

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^^Good Points^^
I'm really quite impressed with this movie. I think that the music really made this more intense and got the viewer into the storyline and watching this. You also did a very nice job on using a lot of different camera views and effects to make this more interesting than a linear movie with a single camera angle. The ending was very good, I'm glad I watched this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations could use some fine tuning, even though they are really good. Framerate seems like it is a little slow.

[Blort and Flitz]

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^^Good Points^^
Kind of cute. I thought the dedication at the end was rather strange, but still funny and made it more personal. Animations weren't bad. At least you made this somewhat interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little boring to me. Sorry, I don't like making noises with my mouth, but either way, you still could have animated a bit more, and maybe done a few more sound effects than just the one for each character.

[Over the Rainbow]

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^^Good Points^^
I think the strong point to this animation would have to be the animations. They were very smooth and had a realistic feel to them. Lots of fighting in this, action packed. I was really most enticed by the music though, I found the song very neat.

^^Needs Improving^^
Basically the same thing I say about most of these stick fighting movies. They always seem to be better when you zoom in on some fight scenes, rather than be zoomed out the whole time.

[Princess Azumanga]

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^^Good Points^^
Decent movie here. It's interesting to see all of the very detailed art made completely using text characters. The dancing figures were pretty funny, and I liked how you "translated" some of your own lyrics from Japanese.

^^Needs Improving^^
For the first bit of this, it was just one picture followed by some smaller pieces of text. I can't believe that you animated or actually made any of the art here, but if I am wrong, I'm sorry.

[Foamy gets the Kegs]

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^^Good Points^^
The artwork was reminiscent of illwillpress's work, which I guess you wanted to do. Uhh...quick loading time and not too long.

^^Needs Improving^^
Foamy's voice was a little bit off, and made it hard to hear what he was saying. Too high pitched and too fast for me to hear. Also, the sound effects in general seemed to be off sync at least a little bit.